i cant say ,u cheated me
i cant say,u betrayed me
i cant say,u have broken my heart
for i cant say u love me or not
but i can say
that i love u and admire u a lot
like the rain which is admired by draught
i will never let u know my feeling
because i know for u
that would be very healing
i also wanted to be with u
for this i have been waiting
for long in the queue
but my destiny for me,
plans something else
for ur ships of dreams
sails somewhere else
u will find me
behind u ,helping u
in each case broad or step
but i promise u one thing in any step
we will never meet!!!!!!!
9 comments:
Good one...seems like, its straight from ur heart.
Simple, rythmic and yet touching...
Who's that unlucky guy???
(ahem ahem)
excellent !
no, i'm not exaggerating or something, but seriously the poem seems to be coming straight frm the heart... awesomely put in words.. and thats wat makes it a true one..
btw, rather than commenting for each post, i'll make all the points over here itself.
1. glad u see ur blog :)
2. well the theme colour(pink), though is totally girlish and i rarely like those colours, but it looks nice as per ur blog's theme.
finally, since its now ur third post.. so get set and go ahead, the world out there is waiting for more from u.. :)
I doesn't agree with above comment poem appears to go in one direction initially and then in other direction.Although it was rhythmic and pls rectify spelling of cheated.
gud hai yaar....
i'm amazd to c d no of ppl around me wid poetic senses....
bst part wz dat u kept thins simple....
cheers!
keep bloggin....
straight to my heart..
It's gud to lose in love, it makes you a better person, you start respecting the emotions of others.
"sapn kis nayan ke nahi tute
meet kab kiske nahi bichade
har barsaat tham nahi pati
shilayun me nami aa nahi pati".
true feelings really worth!!!!!!!
It's gud to lose in love, it makes you a better person, you start respecting emotions of others.
sapn kis nayan ke nahi tute,
Meet kab kiske nahi bhichde,
Har barsaat tham nahi pati,
Shilayun me kabhi nami a nahi pati.
Only god knows why he makes us love those who are not able to love us.
Good one...I mean just awesome u r a gud writer too...a heart touching poem wid simple words(qualities of a gud writer)well,i knw what is to lose in luv,but u r in luv this is more imp.,pyar main sab kuch kabhi nahi milta...
gud going...
yaar ye to bilkul tere jaisa hai pyaara ,sweet aur sach bilkul sach bahut achha;actually no words for that
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